It's a very great and unique Harry Potter fanfiction!! I really really love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great and interesting (although short) plot/storyline and quite good english/translation (you always use the opponent names when talk. Like Leo says "Hermione" when he talk with her, you can use "you" instead).. And grammar is good too.. I like how MC/Leonard is focus with his research then interfere with story.. I love how MC/Leo is friend with Hermione since before Hogwarts and later become lovers (not that I hate Ron, but Hermione is too good for him.. They so different, like fire and water).. I also like that this story show how Harry and Ron is many difficulties without Hermione with them.. It also so different from original story, like Philosopher Stone trial, Lupin and Sirius still alive, Hagrid fates, Umbridge dissapear (this is my favourites Umbridge fate from many other stories), etc.. There're many thinks I don't like about MC/Leo (like he's too cold/eliminate any his enemies. Love researching magic so much that he don't care about others, like he let Voldy ressurect to see the process. Etc).. Although I understand why he's like that (he's researcher and don't care what others think about him. He also don't know much about human psychology, like it's fine and normal for him, but not for others), I still don't like it.. I also agree with him so much about kill his enemies, so they don't come back to hurt his family, lover, and important person later.. There also don't much appearence of Harry in this story, he's like secondary/supporting character in this story (Dumbledore appear more than Harry in this story).. But I understand, because MC/Leo not have many interactions/encounter with Harry and Ron.. Love your story so much author sama 😁👍😍😍😍
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