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Review Detail of MistralPeaks in The Seer Vision

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MistralPeaks
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It’s a good story but reads much more like an outline than a gripping novel. I wish there was more dialogue so we could learn about the characters through their interactions rather than being told! I found a lot of the chapters didn’t even have dialogue at all, but that’s how you learn how to love the characters in a story 🥰

The Seer Vision

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thanks for your thought, that's what im doing now cause the first chapter of this story is focus on characters, more on adventure and friendship, and again thank youuu.