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Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv41yr
2023-11-18 00:59

Han Jue, huh? 😁 well, I would love to read your book but it's still... you know, chapters aren't enough to entertain me so I'll wait till there are 60 or 70 amassed. 👍

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DaoUltimateSage
DaoUltimateSageAuthor

For sure! even though the MC in this won't be so passive like Han Jue, he'll still be cautious enough and spend most of his time cultivating quietly. thanks for the review!

Mega_Tester
Mega_TesterLv1

Harem?

Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv14

harem?? i dont read trash, harem is the worst thing un this world about novels

DaoUltimateSage:For sure! even though the MC in this won't be so passive like Han Jue, he'll still be cautious enough and spend most of his time cultivating quietly. thanks for the review!
AsDarkAsBlack
AsDarkAsBlackLv4

Bro this is a harem story, author said 3 fls.

Eternalsylph:harem?? i dont read trash, harem is the worst thing un this world about novels
DaoistOfSupremacy
DaoistOfSupremacyLv13

Such an overreaction to someone having a different opinion...

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DaoistOfSupremacy
DaoistOfSupremacyLv13

I think the harem won't be so bad it will be more like han jue's harem i think

Eternalsylph:harem?? i dont read trash, harem is the worst thing un this world about novels
HOST_17
HOST_17Lv13

Harem is the worst, the constant love moments make it even worse

Daoistm7Yh5H
Daoistm7Yh5HLv4

Y'all How It Is In Xianxia Harem: Demon Sect/Cult Saintess(Maybe Succubus In Other Novels And Charm Clan In This One?), Ice Land Saintess, Nine-Tailed Fox(Monster/Beast Race), And 3 Isn't Enough, Maybe 5 Or 7; Plus There's The Princess That Turns Empress That Makes 4, Maybe: Elf That Would Be 5, (Plus Will He Go After Houtu!?) and Author, He Coul Get A Dual/Duo-Cultivation Technique As The Cultivation Speed Of His Dao Partners Isn't As Fast As His...So😈

DaoUltimateSage:For sure! even though the MC in this won't be so passive like Han Jue, he'll still be cautious enough and spend most of his time cultivating quietly. thanks for the review!
Daoistm7Yh5H
Daoistm7Yh5HLv4

...Plus A Phoenix

DaoUltimateSage:For sure! even though the MC in this won't be so passive like Han Jue, he'll still be cautious enough and spend most of his time cultivating quietly. thanks for the review!
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

yes, I do admit now

HOST_17:Harem is the worst, the constant love moments make it even worse
LucasMYeet
LucasMYeetLv14

You first please.

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Darkarcanum
DarkarcanumLv15

OK, I've read 185 chapters and have a pretty solid grasp of the story. I'll rate 5 stars, but will also provide some feedback. Pro's: Compelling story, makes you want to keep reading. Feels authentic to the Chinese style. Author keeps track of his characters and events and few plot holes I saw. Mostly decent grammar and isn't annoying to read for a native English speaker like many novels on here are. No Curse Book that solves everything without any effort (so far). Feedback: Somewhat shallow character interaction, a particular disciple is said to feel extremely close to MC more than their own father, but it feels unearned because we don't see any bonding scenes and relevant events that make such a staggering statement feel justified. Character emotional development can't happen off-screen or we the readers won't care about them and will feel like their relationships don't feel real. No romance (yet) - I get it, MC is busy cultivating, but won't he always be busy cultivating until the end of the story when he is The Supreme Creator God or whatever? If you're going to do it, then find a way to make it happen. Also make sure we get the proper emotion building to go with it, better to have no romance than 1 dimensional romance imo. For the future: One of the great limitations of TTP is how reliant on the System Han Jue was, the more you read the more you realised that the System was basically the MC with a Han Jue attached - the System was so ridiculously overpowered that a pig could have been the host and would have done just fine. Make sure that the MC stays front and centre, makes plans intelligently and acts based on human wants, needs and desires, otherwise just watching a System give out endless Deus Ex Machina type treasures that happen to solve all his problems just when he needs them gets old and is not conducive to a healthy novel long term. OK, that's all I can think of for now, you're a good writer, keep it up.

Daoistwaterdrop
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