Review Detail of DeathE in A New Life In How To Train Your Dragon

Definitely rushed and no depth to the story as of ch 18, there is also almost no change to Canon. Idk the authors thoughts but maybe they are trying to speed the 1st movie along and get to after dragons are accepted to deviate from the plot. Basically the first 18chs have been a narration of the movie with the addition of the MC, I think it needs to slow down a lot. There is no depth in the characters at the moment. it just feels like as I said earlier, a narration. Definitely room for improvement, I am curious to how the plot will develop as this is my first HTTYD fic. Definitely room for improvement but it's added to my list5 Stars for goodluck