Review Detail of Samuel_119 in Actually on Haitus
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Hello, author here.It feels empty when there is not even a single review, so here goes. This is my first work, and I really like my own novel. Looking forward for how this is going to turnout at the end. I'm a fan of my own novel afterall.If you like it, give it review. If you don't like it, do the same😋. I will improve with your help and support😊. If you have any qns feel free to ask😇.
Actually on Haitus
Samuel_119
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forget romance. your story is good focus more on the story building. think of how to give him a mission. that's why story without no romance sometimes system is needed because it always give the protagonist missions to do. another thing in novels is power ranking. did the story power only stop at rank SSS. this is your first novel I will always follow your novel from today or you don't write 18 . you're doing a good job just think of how to write novels and the storey building that's all
Ya, I thought of doing that. I will add a bit of romance in the last arcs, focusing on only love though. Not like intimate moments....etc.... Thanks for letting me know..😁 and, Thanks for your support.☺️
JBFIRE_77:Please no romance it holds back the MC
Why do I suddenly feel like, I received a big boost of power. Wow, thanks for letting me know your thoughts. Mc will become busy as time passes, there is no system though, he will create his own missions. About the power ranking, the last one is Ss, I mentioned it in the 1st chapter.
Chimee_Chieke:forget romance. your story is good focus more on the story building. think of how to give him a mission. that's why story without no romance sometimes system is needed because it always give the protagonist missions to do. another thing in novels is power ranking. did the story power only stop at rank SSS. this is your first novel I will always follow your novel from today or you don't write 18 . you're doing a good job just think of how to write novels and the storey building that's all