Item: The Ascension of Contracted Spirits
Rating: 2.4

surlochLv45mth

2024-05-19 16:38

Story was ok for first 100 chapters. By around 150 though it devolves into chunibyo fan fic. Translation quality is also not good enough to push through, even at 150 ish genders still getting mixed up. Author also fell into the trap of serialised fiction where they introduce too many plot points, to where you realise half of them will never be satisfactorily addressed. Finally, they break the cardinal rule of suspension of disbelief, where if you have established lore you need to stick to it. However spirits and MC start ignoring or acting contrary to the world rules, which is a huge deal breaker.

The Ascension of Contracted Spirits

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