Review Detail of Kayle_ezel in Dungeon jumper [bl]

I'm going to not go to high or low on myself so please help increase that number if you like it. Now please comment if any problem or critiques as I will adjust as this is my first writing attempt. I am currently very motivated to write but often fail to catch awkward phrasing or sentences that make sense when I write them but not quite when read altogether I will slowly alter and adjust it as I reread and fix up any problems. I may go long periods with no updates or rapid updates it depends on how I feel and my current motivation. This will be sporadic and I know many people may dislike that, I will do my best to not drop this but I make no promises, I currently am Writing this on the fly with little planning other than a general wish for what I want in it. This is written purely as a this is what I like to read but nothing quite fits so might as well write it myself. chapters are currently small but will expand as more events occur and will need more details added. The romance in this will take a long time and the male lead will most likely not appear for a while so do not expect large romance as I did not add the romance tag for a reason. After all that please write your current thought and expectations in the novel chapter or review section and I thank you for looking at my most likely butchered first writing attempt.