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Othy
OthyLv1510mth
2024-06-12 07:44

The story seemed cool all the way up to the point i learned the MC was some kind of penal soldier.(part way through chapter 1) the author took the lowest hanging fruit and likely doesn’t know everybody hates an MC with no agency. The only other rule that is as high on the list is to never take things away from the from the MC. There are exceptions but I have serious doubts that someone on webnovel is good enough to break the basic rules and get away with it.

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