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2024-06-04 06:15

Fantastic book, besides the terrible translation quality. Shame this book ended already and although it was on a note that could be considered finishing the book it was far from over, it made it seem like he would trascend this universe get to a higher Realm, achieve detachment from the river of time and the universe, and fight in the stronger bigger universe. but in the end, the book just ended when he became the strongest in the smaller universe. it never continued on with the realm that he was currently Going to go into or further, he never stepped outside this universe, he never achieved detachment & realized what that does, and he never brought back the Vitality to the universe espeically the planet earth was just left there mostly. there were so many unfinshed things and there was still so much story that could of been written. but now it has ended on a open note or a half closed note at best. 😔

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