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DUCKINGAROUND
DUCKINGAROUNDLv41yr
2023-12-15 21:28

Reading this made me realize how good MTL novels really are, thank you.

In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

HAMMAD
3.9
56 Chs

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HAMMAD
HAMMADAuthor

Is this really that bad.

1yr
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HAMMAD
HAMMADAuthor

I Hope you can please respond. Bro I just lost all confidence in my almost none to 0 writing skills. Please I Hope you respond and tell me is this fanfic really that bad. Cause if it is then rather then wasting time. I could just do something else.

HAMMAD:Is this really that bad.
1yr
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DUCKINGAROUND
DUCKINGAROUNDLv4

No it's not really bad per se, It's just the writing and grammar that made it bad, but the concept and progression is alright

HAMMAD:I Hope you can please respond. Bro I just lost all confidence in my almost none to 0 writing skills. Please I Hope you respond and tell me is this fanfic really that bad. Cause if it is then rather then wasting time. I could just do something else.
1yr
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YangRen
YangRenLv6

yeah

DUCKINGAROUND:No it's not really bad per se, It's just the writing and grammar that made it bad, but the concept and progression is alright
11mth
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DaoOfRizzness
DaoOfRizznessLv4

and please how you make the letters big or small like its just unpleasant to the eye but the concept is good nonetheleless.

HAMMAD:I Hope you can please respond. Bro I just lost all confidence in my almost none to 0 writing skills. Please I Hope you respond and tell me is this fanfic really that bad. Cause if it is then rather then wasting time. I could just do something else.
11mth
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HAMMAD
HAMMADAuthor

can you comment to the place where you see this problem. so i will avoid it in the furture.

DaoOfRizzness:and please how you make the letters big or small like its just unpleasant to the eye but the concept is good nonetheleless.
11mth
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sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

Future not furture. I am just trying to tell you how it is written

HAMMAD:can you comment to the place where you see this problem. so i will avoid it in the furture.
1mth
Other Reviews
Kqro
KqroLv4

So, I loved the story on Wattpad because I couldn't find a fic on Lookism where it wasn't LGBT romance, the story is very interesting and the updates are regular. I hope you don't drop it

1yr

FIN99
FIN99Lv4

the story is awesome nice characters but the grammar sucks and here I thought i had a bad grammar (sorry but im kinda straightforward) good thing im used to reading MTL novels but hey nice storty and you can fix the grammar cheer up bud you got a good imagination not everyone are good at grammar in their first time

12mth
Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4

It’s amazing… it really brings tears to my eyes.

1yr
radioactive_jig0l0
radioactive_jig0l0Lv4

reading this English gave me a stroke

7mth
KING_ABBASI
KING_ABBASILv4

bro c'mon don't be like this 😤 upload all the chapters

1yr
YangRen
YangRenLv6

the author's way of writing is confusing as f**k...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
JustSomeRandomNPC
JustSomeRandomNPCLv4

i will come back here when the chapter is at least 20 to 30 and when you improve and edit things, but for now i will leave this 5 star here.

1yr
_RVFI
_RVFILv3

bro when are you coming back😭. its been two monthes🥲

6mth
jeffmiste
jeffmisteLv4

PLEASE give me more it's a good fic........................................................................................................................

9mth
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