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Antaxmorro
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2023-11-10 12:52

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The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

itachi1010
3.8
65 Chs

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Woshi
WoshiLv5

Talk about terrible pacing. Chapter 3 was pretty unbearable to read. Three chapters in MC goes to what the previous body thought was a hidden expert, proceeds to tell her of the changes in his body/getting his talent back. She ambushes him, he returns her back to his home and while he has the upper hand he asks her to be a loyal subject and teach him, which as far as I've read, cultivation techniques don't really work for him and comprehension is the best tool to use to train. So why when you've transmigrated from a modern society and after years(?) of studying and grabbing a hold of six eyes does he need a teacher from a cultivation world where they're understanding of space is just mumbo jumbo? Then of course it's revealed the hidden expert is from another universe that's coming in to this universe to steal resources. And by the oaths that they made, it looks like he's being dragged into this inter-universe war that just started for whatever reason. TLDR: Pacing sucks, too many elements introduced that are as silly as the decisions of the MC.

1yr

Ero_no_Kami
Ero_no_KamiLv4

Thought you made the Mc wear 3 glasses that will become 12 eyes

1yr
UnholyFalseHeaven
UnholyFalseHeavenLv4

Good concept , trash English......,......

1yr
IHaveNoNamingSense
IHaveNoNamingSenseLv4

The story is good. I was waiting for a Gojo powerwanking fic for some time now. But the mistakes in the Grammers made my eyes bleed. A bit of advice: Use "Grammerly".

1yr
Endo_2014
Endo_2014Lv2

Seeing so many 5 star reviews i knew i had to step in, looks like people here havent read enough good quality stuff to rate this sh** 😒😒😏

1yr
Whtvr
WhtvrLv5

good concept, pronouns are messed up tho

1yr
lawrence_
lawrence_Lv4

u ruined it`````````````````````````````

1yr
ChaoticMind
ChaoticMindLv14

Good concept but needs editing. Readable but due to grammar errors, the flow of the narrative is distorted and a bit annoying for me. I suggest you look for an editor to help you out.Over all, still a good concept for a fanfiction and I would like to read an edited version of it.

1yr
Quinton1200
Quinton1200Lv4

a pretty good story, the only problem is the grammar it makes it almost unreadable

1yr
Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2

The title should 12 reasons to not read this bullshit cultivators story. 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡

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