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To start this review off the Grammar is absolutely terrible. The Author constantly calls someone a she than halfway in her sentence calls her a "he" and vice versa for some other characters. Also, please add some more commas since it will help break up some sentences so they make a little more sense. Besides the grammar the story isn't bad.
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Thanks for the feedback 😭 I really appreciate it. I'd realize my grammar is messy and usually I start revising after the story is finished, but for this story I will revise after volume 1 is finished and until now I haven't dared to submit a contract because of that. Please forgive my inconvenience and shortcomings as a writer 🙏🏻 thank you very much, may God bless you 💕