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2024-04-01 15:06

Overall, I am enjoying the story so far. As previous reviews have stated, it's not just about a specific "genre" of wizards. It includes different variations of wizards from your typical Harry Potter style wizard to monks and magical creatures such as vampires and wearwolfs. My only complaint so far is that there are a few times when the gender of characters is switched around, so it makes it a little hard to keep track of who is who and in my opinion the transitions can use a bit of work. There are times when one thing is happening, and then in the next paragraph or the next chapter, it jumps to something that is happening later on in the day. With that being said, the story still makes sense I just feel as if the transitions can use some work. Once again overall its a good story so far and I look forward to seeing where it goes.

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