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Pazexe
PazexeLv11yr
2024-01-08 08:34

Esssssssss muyyyyyyyyyyy buenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa laaaa historiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ......................................... ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Naruto: Shinobi SI

KK9494
4.5
33 Chs

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JSirMixalotL
JSirMixalotLLv4

Overall a great approach. There are only 2 things i have to point out.1: Ther are many explanations that disrupt the flow of the story. Since this is a Fanfic there is no need to go into so much detail that most readers will skip anyway.2: It is quite slow paced. Again very detailed, but way too much in my opinion. Since this is pure training/learning until now it gets boring quite fast, at least for my expectation of a story in this world.Apart from those 2 points it is a great experience. Very good grammar, frequent updates and a very different MC compared to most FFs. Maybe you can do something about my critique, other than that keep up the good work

1yr

KK9494
KK9494Author

Point out any mistakes in the paragraph comments, I will try to correct them. Also give some reviews. ..............................................

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KK9494
KK9494Author

Please review, comment and send stones. Try do so in a encouraging way, I canโ€™t handle negative bashing. I am a new author โœ๏ธ.

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Sphnqs
SphnqsLv14

Reveal spoiler

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MrVenerable
MrVenerableLv13

I read chapter 1 to 19. Everything almost perfect but the MC is a bit immature and emotional unstable I hope there would be a great disaster will happen so the MC would become more mature and become a great Ninja, because for what I see the MC is just ranting, complaining and not doing anything that will help or relief him from his problem.

1yr
Rafael_Suassuna
Rafael_SuassunaLv1

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1

Walaupun bahasanya buruk,alur ceritanya lumayan bagus.semangat ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
Zenaxs
ZenaxsLv1

Thank you author, it was an interesting adventure, I hope you can please us again. What inspires me most in your work is the world design; itโ€™s truly something well-developed and living its own life. Good luck.

1yr
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

๐Ÿ‘.

1yr
isabel_andrade
isabel_andradeLv2

It's in the top 5 favorite fafics. Very well written in worldbuilding, character, level of strength, politics, time connection, interpersonal relationships and much more. Please keep up the great work.๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿซฃ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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