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ShuYme
ShuYmeLv51yr
2023-09-20 17:03

Ive seen other authors fall into the trap like this author has, instead of actually writing a story with characters that are fleshed out and have unique developments and Nice dialogue, he has instead chosen to just write a summary of events instead of a story. The story has no interaction between characters, no action, nothing of substance, it is just a summary of What happens.

A Game of Bast

Lania_Avery
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Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

your prologue dont make sense at all , starwars then bast from marvel then gameofthrones -_- .. comon dude make sene.......................................

1yr

Gunts92
Gunts92Lv10

If I hear someone say that black people can't make up stories I'll hit them, but man (author) you're not helping JOKE. you make a taco with lots of stuff but the mixture is not coherent even if the result is good, no one will want to eat it

1yr
zeen711
zeen711Lv4

The greatest thing I saw today hope you keep it up it has a goodvibe

1yr
Lania_Avery
Lania_AveryAuthor

Shadow ................... ....in the shadows

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