Review Detail of Iseeyou in TVD/TO: The Original Husband

Tho I have to admit author made the MC really simpy like and cringe. Everything he does is for rebekka and even totallly forgets about his caring sister just for her. I wish Mc had a personality that didn’t revolve around Rebekka. that’s my only complaint.

Cringe how so?

For example Chapter 21, 5th to last paragraph

I mean yeah I guess so but it's kinda sweet too.

more cringe than sweet tho

Thank you for your effective constructive criticism. I will try to make him less cringe from now on. And his personality WILL evolve over the chapters. After all, it is called character growth.

It would be fine if the mc slept with others, it just feels like the author thinks it fine one way and not the other.

That’s why I said the mc is to simpy

The story is just bad that is it. The protagonist takes to many losses gaining nothing. And the reason for our ‘pathetic’ behaviour is because of the protagonist bias. If you are searching for a more official term than look up Mere-exposure effect. I‘m not reading this story from Rebekahs Perspective neither am i here to look at everything rationally if i enjoy it then ill read if not then not.

Personally I just enjoy the novel and don’t understand why people crying because Rebekah slept with someone else. If you don’t like the novel tho I understand everyone has different opinions

Prob because she “cheated” when mc is only about her and author wont add anyone else tho that could be a good point for a reason why to get a harem if author decides to regardless she cheats once she can do it again so I’m outti

that not the problem blud the problem is after all that the mc is still a simp and love her unconditionally that act prove she does not thats all.