Just because of your cover, I’m gonna give you a complete five star “review”

they forgot about the Admech and the power of imperiums ships and technology the inquisitor can flick his wrist and press a button and destroy the world or condem it in a single vox transmission. also i don't like arrogant mc. also he said that if the other saiyens kill humans and cause problems he will go rogue, and his team mates go and kill humans. and he doesn't go rogue like he said and he basically forgot. Basically Plot holes LOTS

Warhammer? That's starting big. I just hope you don't abandon this story, as the Warhammer universe is fascinating.[img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

Good start, keep it up 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊

I would like to start by saying that i particularly enjoyed this story. It had it's weak point especially when the war arc happened there was heavy use of chatgpt. but since that 7 chapter part we have returned to a pretty great story with fairly good smut in-between.

good start.you should look into the genetor (bio admech) and the rogue trader, the mc could get himself a warrant of trade by selling some bio tech to the genetor, becoming a rogue trader would give him a certain level of independence without having to fear the imperium.

starts a little slow but picks up in my interest story progression wise well enough. I can't wait to see how interacting with the imperium goes. oh and good luck to the eldar trying to be prideful in front of planet killers.

great idea so far, keep it up. This story has alot of potential in it and I'd love to see it flourish.

It's a great story, and I'd love to read more. I hope you don't plan to drop it :) I've found it on Royalroad first actually, but it's one chapter shorter there, so I assume someone just copy-paste your work there. Thanks for writing it!