Review Detail of KexKexKex in Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar

Short review: It's good. Things that might bother you: 1] The first 5 chapters are the mc telling a guard his life's story up to the present time. Some readers seem to be bothered by it, but it just skips the same old boring reincarnation, past life identity, and baby phase and starts the story at a more interesting point. 2] The grammar might feel iffy since it is a translation, but nothing that would take me out of the story.