Review Detail of Hezii_2G in Return of the undying saint

Item: Return of the undying saint
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

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I personally really enjoy the story plot, however the grammar needs work. Such as misspelling and missing words to the repeating of sentences, words, and even chapters. The novel started great but after ten or so chapters the mistakes listed above made the story more difficult to follow even to the point of confusion. I feel like the plot and idea of the story are great, and if the mistakes were fixed I would 10/10 recommend. All in all I enjoyed reading it but I kind of had to numb my brain in some parts.

Return of the undying saint

Shameless_saint

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Honestly even if everything stayed the same I would keep reading. I wasn’t lying when I said I really enjoy the plot. I think it’s a great mix of different genres to make something unique

Shameless_saint:I really apologise for the inconveniences, my previous editor had done a really poor job, so currently I have changed editors and the quality of my work is sure to improve, he will also do well go through all my previous chapters and icrease their readability, keep reading.😤😤

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Shameless_saintAuthorShameless_saint

I really apologise for the inconveniences, my previous editor had done a really poor job, so currently I have changed editors and the quality of my work is sure to improve, he will also do well go through all my previous chapters and icrease their readability, keep reading.😤😤

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Shameless_saintAuthorShameless_saint

Thank you so muchthanks to your scrutiny the quality of my chapters have increased

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