I really wanted to like it after how obvious it was in the first chapter that the author had Naruto's personality down pat, but this story commits the unforgivable sin of being boring, and this aggravation is multiplied by the many 'AU' inclusions that read more like source errors. Finally, the story is padded heavily with lengthy character descriptions that feel like they were yanked out of a wiki. Overall experience: disappointment.
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