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Review Detail of Humbuub in Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage

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Humbuub
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The whole Naruto lore revolves around Sage of 6 paths' sons, and their reincarnations. Genderbend Sasuke just doesn't make sense. The characters interactions felt forced. We're 1 chapter in and author wrote Guy on a home invasion scene. Why tf would a Jonin break in someone else's home, and why would he volunteer in training Naruto? It's basically like this every time so I can't really immerse myself when everything don't make sense. The updates are good and the writing structures are on point.

Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage

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DaoistU7cpKo
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first of all no need to write that and that is within guys character he might find it slightly unyouthful but to spread the power of youth he will do it

Humbuub
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you think Guy is stupid or something? He's one of the strongest Jounin of Konoha, hence he's in the circle and knows Hiruzen's decree regarding Naruto.

DaoistU7cpKo:first of all no need to write that and that is within guys character he might find it slightly unyouthful but to spread the power of youth he will do it
DaoistU7cpKo
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bit late didn't open this app past month and a half but your rebuke literally proved my point why wouldn't he train naruto he would be fully down because youth and he is one of the few who knew everything because he is smart why wouldn't he train the boy Minato wanted as a hero especially if he is motivated

Humbuub:you think Guy is stupid or something? He's one of the strongest Jounin of Konoha, hence he's in the circle and knows Hiruzen's decree regarding Naruto.