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YeshuaH
YeshuaHLv31yr
2023-09-27 21:59

This is a well-written political drama with solid grammar and consistent chapter updates. The main characters are well-detailed, and there is eagerness to see the progression of the story. However, I suggest that the pace be improved by introducing the conflict earlier in the story. Additionally, it is recommended to further develop the world's context to enhance the overall storytelling experience.

Remote Village to Strongest Nation

Meowder
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Meowder
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Hello! Author here shamelessly giving my work 5 stars XD Although the story may start a little slow, I'm confident that it will get better as more chapters get released. I also promise to be consistent in updating daily so if the genre of my work is right up your alley, please give it a try! Thanks in advance <3

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zizi_wiwi
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Wonderful story I hope he build a real nation and becomes a king and devolp technology and infrastructure

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Tama_Kun
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For me this story is so good, the description , plot, mc and etc

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Ninestar619_5803
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It seem like I own this novel a lot. It has a wonderful plot that I loved so far. The world building and the setting of the stage are all excellent. Not to mention the character designing so remarkable as it makes us love what we chose. Plus the writing style is too good that it feels easy to flow with the story. Over all, great boy and well done author

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00Zero
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It’s a great book if you are looking for city or kingdoms building story. The writing quality is excellent and updates regularly.

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Dummybeing
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Blanc Rougenfort's quest for revenge and safety drives this story. A good world building and revenge story is a must read! Good job author!

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ToufiqUlAlam
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One word - amazing. I love action and am not a fan of flowery language that develops one para worth action to 5 humongous chapters. I feel bored and tired. Not that I don't appreciate the diction but I don't really like the school of verbosity style in single paragraph. Author didn't waste time to bring the action to the front and the heroes really engaged in the story. Everyone got their part of act and not a single line was written unnecessarily. I loved it...I will keep reading it. I you enjoy reading action stories...this is the one you should go for. Cheers!!

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SuperAyan
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I'd like to point out one thing. Reading the story is like a break from the eyes^^ I usually wore glasses when I read because I often encounter paragraphs that's very long and the words felt like suffocating me, gotta blink my eyes many times to continue..but this one is easy to read, at least for me, grammar is good and the writing is neat. Conversations with characters are fun and doesn't seem force and dull^^I'd recommend this one to any readers who want to sit back and relax while flipping pages to kill time.🙌

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RaepistInChief
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Mannn that was good ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,👍🏻

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