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UelUel
UelUelLv41yr
2023-09-15 23:30

I enjoy reading the story. I also like the balance between the dialogue and narration. If there's one thing to comment on though, it's about the relationship between the characters. I was a bit confused. Feral knows both Ace and Luki but Ace sounds like he doesn't know Feral while Luki knows him...

Discord to Zombies

Dark_Ember_7708
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Since this is based off of a discord server, I incorporated relationships into it. Since I (Feral the Little Kiggi) talk more with Luki (Luki the Dragon Kiggi), its obvious we'd be close. On the other hand, I barely talk to Ace (Ace the Avocado), so it'd be quite awkward at first.

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Jaxiel
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Haven't read zombie apocalypse in a while, its good. Also, your comedy is gold. Impressive how created a story out of a discord chat. worth to give a read for fun.

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It has only 3 chapters but is full of fast-paced action. It reminds me of Chaos Seeds - a book from the LitRPG genre written by Aeleron Kong. The story is captivating. I hope the author will give us a full experience with a finished product. Cheers!

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Pretty good, not a lot for me to chew on considering that it's only one chapter, but hey, I can still tell that there's potential. Hope to see more.

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