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Elia_Contento
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it is very difficult for me write a review of this novel, the world design and the power system are marvelous and the story had a lot of potential but what i don t really like is the story development that is too tragic, basically it seem that everything with the exception of the MC has to die, half for tragic event and the other half because MC. The other thing that i can t stand its the character design, the only person that is somehow described it is the MC, and even in his case he reason basically like a kid, that may work when he is really a kid but after that no because mean zero personal growth. The other characters are not developed except to give names to the dead and there is no type of construction regarding interpersonal relationships.

Kill the Sun

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Petru_3777
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i also dropped it. not my piece

TeLLer_taLes
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If you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.