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2023-11-25 20:15

not gonna lie, you had us at the first part, but as the chapter enters 2 digits it got lamer... you were just reiterating all the events on Greek Myth, overly brief summary of them.. lame .. but the part where he developed his powers are cool

DXD: As a OC Primordial

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Chuluo
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Kinda bad, first the mc name is Ouranos II it’s as lame as Bob Uchiha. Second the character interaction are bad all the moon god come to the moon the mc says bless the moon and they do it? Just like that? Gods are supposed to have a minimum of pride. Another example is making Gaia blush by telling her she’s pretty… Seriously

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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

No synopsis = Instant 1 star Review.

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Saffon
SaffonLv1

Jesus, man, are you seriously writing something like that? Even for the finite logic of the world of Dxd, what you wrote looks like the delusions of a schoolboy. Although maybe you really are in school. People who rate it more than 2-3 stars clearly something wrong with the head.

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unknown_20281
unknown_20281Lv4

it started good on till you made the Mc call Gaya mother I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that

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NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11

I would correct it to DXD: pathetic OC. . . .

1yr
DoppelGanger09
DoppelGanger09Lv11

The characters feel like machines the dialog is one dimensional, and stilted. The grammar itself Is awful, I have a headache just attempting to read it. The story itself is interesting and fairly unique premise wise. It's just brought down to illegible at best by the writing quality and dialog

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Cryomancer
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Not bad.Keep up the good work 💛🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

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this is just a really bad story, it is just not good

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WML
WMLLv1

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Akito_
Akito_Lv14

the story is great so far can't wait to see how it progresses in the future

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