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2024-07-11 12:54

First thing, writing is lazy. The novel is good but not excellent. It costs a lot of coins because there is too much information in every description in every event but less dialogue, Much more repetitive information in different words but it expresses the same meaning ( like i am not stupid so why repeat the same explanation?) And for the Main character whose soul from the modern world seems very normie. He doesn't seem to know wat to do. Seems all he did is sign papers. Even his BUTLER is much better than our MC, who did most of the things like making a wine industry in advance and making some scientists/ victoria awards. In Automobiles hes being passive. In ship design hes being passive. Arms design his being passive. When he can change most of the design he's being passive most of the events. The repeating description most irritates me.

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TheFooL
TheFooLLv13

racism is something you expect in this novel

Mygg4n
Mygg4nLv12

Of course, since it's a chinese author.

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