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TranquilConsort
TranquilConsortAuthor1yr
2023-09-13 07:41

Please review and share your thoughts on the novel. 😁

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

you need to slow down let character interact and feel. Right now, its like reading the summary or overview of a real novel. There's very little dialogue and character interactions are at bare minimum, we just get speedrun of his story, mc went there, he did this, we got this and came back etc... without actually being there with him.

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

mc seems too naive

lucasleorio
lucasleorioLv12

Pkease use something like grammarly to fix your punctuations, you're missing a lot of commas.

The_Crimson_Abyss
The_Crimson_AbyssLv5

I hope all character names are not ChineseThat was one of the major reasons I stopped reading it

machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Is there romance?

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