'Crows x Souls' - my second story focuses on Itachi crossing over to the Soul Society of the Bleach verse after releasing the Edō Tensei during the 4th Great Ninja War.One of the few takeways from this fic is that I want to make it as simple and engaging as I can get it and to that end I'll try not to stray from the initial focus of the story and keep Itachi’s personality as original as possible, even with due change in character development.Thers's romance but I'll probably drag it out until I'm sure it will be great addition to the story.On the subject of keeping Itachi’s character as original as possible, that means most of the Sharingan specialties won't be focused on as Itachi, like every other major Uchiha, had a specific way of using his eyes, and his specialty is very obvious.Give it a try and tell me what you think. I'll probably take this one slow not to burn myself out too quickly.

disappointment, that's what I feel, Itachi is acting stupid, firstly he is too insensitive, Itachi is a kind person, he is a complete pacifist, in the Naruto world he had to play the role of a villain, but in this world I don’t see a situation where he can just stand and watch how people die, but most of all I hate how this “shinobi” collects information, or rather, he doesn’t do this, even at the very beginning he could have learned a lot more from his grandfather, but he doesn’t do it, for some reason he fights with the Shinigami, hides, I don’t understand the logic of his actions, in the society of souls everyone knows about the Shinigami, the academy and other information that Itachi is thinking about, why rack your brains if you can go to the academy and find out everything there, even if you don’t want to be a Shinigami, you can simply not graduate from the academy, in general, Itachi is behaving stupidly, and for this character this is not permissible

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good writing, but the pacing is too slow. It feels like I'm reading repetitive chapters of Itachi's brooding. The power levels also don't add up. It was insulting that even without shikai and not a swordsman himself, he still could stood his ground against centuries old Captains and get away with it. Updates seem regular which is nice.

So nobody told him, there is a academy where he can learn how to become captain nicee ......................................... ........ ................................................

How come this isn't in top 5 yet. I must say it's very well executed, Itachi's character is written as close as possible to kishimoto's. The story development is decent. I like how you wrote his powers. Character interactions, fights and other details like when he collecting information was well written. My only hope is that you keep writing this Gem🙌.

People don’t follow the rule of 1000words a chapter anymore There is no entertainment in reading a chapter that takes 2 scrolls to finish

I have read till 7 Chapters.So far So good.Itachi's character is still consistance.How will he interact with the important character is yet to see

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