Why is this number one on popular? It's not good. Just look at the ranks introduced in chapter 1: Altered Beings, Super soldier, and FiendGod??? Could you not even stick with the same punctuation; all of them have diffrent spacing and punctuation for no reason. Lots of grammar oddities such as this. The whole plot of how humans have powers is weak and flimsy, DUST( later just dust and Dust, another example) is inhaled and makes animals alll like 9ft+ tall and just makes humans faster and stronger? Yeah okay. TRASH.
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