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2023-09-19 03:45

The story feels very flat and empty and there is no rewarding progression. I was expecting a football novel and not one about human interaction and mindset so not really my cup of tea. Chapters are very short too but I guess overall it’s fine for a passion project

Echoes of the Pitch

said_alamri
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Hey there! First off, massive thanks for diving into our football saga and for sharing your thoughts. 🙌 Your feedback kicked the ball right into the net of our attention! ⚽️ Guess what? We're gearing up for some extra time after Chapter 50. We're talking more football action, longer chapters, and even more twists and turns on and off the pitch. Your wish is our command (well, sort of 😉). So, lace up those reading boots and get ready for a revamped journey with Liam and the gang. And hey, always feel free to shout from the stands (or just drop a comment) with any more thoughts or ideas. We're all ears... or eyes, in this case! Catch you on the flip side, and once again, thanks for being part of our team! 🥅📖 Cheers,

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"Within the pages of 'Echoes of the Pitch', you'll embark on a journey that transcends the boundaries of a football field. It's not just a tale of goals and glory, but a deep dive into the human spirit, resilience, and the bonds that tie us. Whether you're a football enthusiast or someone seeking a heartwarming tale of dreams and determination, this story promises to touch your heart and inspire your soul. Join us in celebrating not just the game, but the passion, challenges, and relationships that define it. Dive in, and let the echoes of Liam's journey resonate with your own."

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