Review Detail of lok_4369 in Harry Potter: Another Chance

can't say much about stability so I just listened to others, anyway, many small mistakes, though the readers make them fun at times, the ver of harry is absolutely annoying and stupid, though that what's he was like in the books so Ig that's fine. (I personally don't like it though) there is some development in other characters but mc is already a mature person so no development there, Like the AU but Neville should have been given more development. anyway. its pretty avg for me in general.