Writing Quality 4.5/5 Story development 3/5 Character design 3/5 Updating stability 4.5/5 World background 5/5 overall rating 4/5. The story is very well written, and there is at least 1 chapter every other day which is good enough. The character design has some flaws that can become very annoying at times, for example, Harry chooses to be low key, average or decent in everything he does because he doesn't want attention. Sure this is a smart move but the readers want an MC that shines bright in at least some ways. The MC could have been showing enough ability to be one of the best in his year and that wouldn't be dangerous for him since he isn't the prophecies One. But instead, he chooses to be an average Joe. The only other flaw this fanfic has is that the story development is affected by his low key behaviour. What I mean with this is that, there is so far absolutely zero reason for us to read through the first year in Hogwarts because the MC just hides throughout it. It feels like we should jump to the last year so the MC can finally show what he got as one of the most powerful wizards alive. But don't misunderstand, the story got its strengths as well, politics, mental struggles with fitting in, he is op even if no one knows it, and that's why I haven't dropped this at chapter 40 yet.
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Thank you for the review. I think that if you keep reading, you'll like where it goes. As much as Harry wants to hide his abilities, that would not be possible forever and more people will start to find out what he can actually do.
And what's the reason for abandoning Hedwig.She was like a family in the last life ,he spent a lot of time with her sharing memories.Now just because he want to ***lick Naval,he abandoned her.
