Just like its name, the book is chaotic - littered with bad grammar and jarring gaps in the flow of the story. The plot seems to be intruiging but, it needs to edited and some parts need to rewritten - they disrupt the reader, destroying the natural flow of world building and immeraion into the story.Overall, a good effort on the part of the author, but, it's not a masterpiece.
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LIKErashidatidowu5:well indeed the grammar needs some adjustment, but like I will say, no one is perfect. but still I also think he can do better in the English part, but as for the plot. if you have read more than 200 to 250 chapters. then I believe you won't be saying what you are saying. hehehe