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luckyblacksheep
luckyblacksheepLv138mth
2024-05-26 13:37

The story so far is good but only downside I can see is the chapter is so short! This is my first time seeing a pay wall that have such a short chapters. Sometimes to make the chapters long the author put the last sentence in the last chapter to the first part of the next chapter. Unnecessary.

Chaos Devourer System

Supreme_IQ
4.4
762 Chs

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Supreme_IQ
Supreme_IQAuthor

Bro. You only read to Chapter 12. The Pay wall is at 41? How did you find out that the paywall chapters are small if you only read to 12. And you said I was repeating paragraphs? Can you tell me what chapters those were? It's another lie. Why are you trying so hard to ruin a book by gathering famous reasons of other books failure and simply pasting it in any potential book you find. You're sending away potential readers...

8mth
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00_darkness_00
00_darkness_00Lv11

just ignore him. alot of them out there.

Supreme_IQ:Bro. You only read to Chapter 12. The Pay wall is at 41? How did you find out that the paywall chapters are small if you only read to 12. And you said I was repeating paragraphs? Can you tell me what chapters those were? It's another lie. Why are you trying so hard to ruin a book by gathering famous reasons of other books failure and simply pasting it in any potential book you find. You're sending away potential readers...
8mth
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Dream_Lord14
Dream_Lord14Lv13

lol😂😂

00_darkness_00:just ignore him. alot of them out there.
8mth
luckyblacksheep
luckyblacksheepLv13

Yeah I really stop at that chapter because I dont have the energy to continue, idk why. Since the novel is under the 24-hr free reading I also checked the chapters till the newest because I’m quite curious if it still a bit shorter, which I found out that it is! Even around chapter 500. The newest one is even shorter than the old chapters! I’m sorry for posting this I just dont want to pay if the chapters are a bit short, maybe thats the reason why I didn’t continue?

8mth
luckyblacksheep
luckyblacksheepLv13

I don't intend to spoil your novel; those are just my observations. I didn't say paragraph. You can check chapters 7 through 11 since I just read around chapter 14. I noticed the repetition there. If my review seems like a means of defaming your book, I apologize. I posted this based on what I’ve observed. 😢

Supreme_IQ:Bro. You only read to Chapter 12. The Pay wall is at 41? How did you find out that the paywall chapters are small if you only read to 12. And you said I was repeating paragraphs? Can you tell me what chapters those were? It's another lie. Why are you trying so hard to ruin a book by gathering famous reasons of other books failure and simply pasting it in any potential book you find. You're sending away potential readers...
8mth
luckyblacksheep
luckyblacksheepLv13

Yup that’s also my mindset when Im reading a new book. Because of our different preferences some book can be good to us while bad to others. But I didn’t say any lies on my review. You can check the novel and tell me if what I say is lies so that I will delete this review gladly.

00_darkness_00:just ignore him. alot of them out there.
8mth
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Supreme_IQ
Supreme_IQAuthor

Updated Author Review: As we’ve reached a total of 750+ chapters, I believe it’s time to address some of the common questions and concerns. One of the most frequently asked questions is: “Is this a harem novel? How many female leads, if any?” Well, as of now, with 750 chapters written, the MC has not shown any interest in settling down with a female lead, and he is still a virgin. So, if you’re reading this for romance or intimate scenes, I’m afraid this might not be the story for you. Secondly, I’ve received quite a few complaints regarding the mixing of stats and poor grammar. I understand there have been a lot of negative reviews about these issues, and I’ve taken them to heart. In response, I decided to pause writing temporarily until these problems are fully addressed. I’m happy to announce that I’ve hired a qualified and experienced editor to help re-edit the book, starting from Chapter 1. He plans to edit 20 chapters a day until we reach Chapter 750. Starting from October 15th, you can expect 20 edited chapters every day. If you prefer to read the corrected version, I recommend calculating the number of edited chapters based on the date you’re reading this review and adjusting your reading pace accordingly. Another 20 chapters will be edited the following day, and so on. If you still encounter grammatical errors, please try clearing the app’s cache or delete and re-download the book. That should fix the issue. Regarding updates, since I’ve now hired an editor, I plan to resume releasing new chapters—at least 2 per day—starting soon. Lastly, to all those who were disappointed by the pause in updates, I sincerely apologize. I’m still learning the ropes of being an author, and seeing negative comments can be tough to handle. That’s why I chose to stop temporarily and fix the issues before continuing. Thank you for your patience and understanding. I’m grateful to everyone who has stuck with me this far, and I’m committed to seeing this story through to the end. Muchos gracias to you all.

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Supreme_IQ
Supreme_IQAuthor

SSHHHH, quiet, just here to give my book a quick five star review. It's not shameless if you're quiet about it.Anyway we can also use this for some Q&A about the novel and I'll reply back within 60seconds.Trust me I'm always ON!

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Supremeking92
Supremeking92Lv12

One of the best novel I have read so far. I see the author added villain tag and this was also the reason I gave this novel a shot I hope the author don’t make the Mc naive. I want to see the Mc digging graves to devour and secretly killing people to increase his strength. Author I hope u make this story really long and don’t drop this novel cause it has a lot of potential

1yr
ImDove
ImDoveLv11

One of the best system novel I have read so far[img=gift]I look forward to reading and taking tips.

1yr
Frost_Geek
Frost_GeekLv3

Even though it's in the early stages in progressing quite nicely keep it going. It has massive potential to be at the top Author don't mind bad reviews you are doing great

1yr
NicholasAren
NicholasArenLv15

I made it to chapter 230 roughly and I've noticed there are a significant amount of chapters that are from entirely different stories. one of the annoying things outside of the continuous spelling and grammar mistakes is his insistent use on immediately. in one chapter you can see immediately being used six or so times or more

4mth
Ben_Davis_9909
Ben_Davis_9909Lv1

While I won't deny the fact that the story is well written, I just can't continue reading it. Juxtaposing this novel with MBS, the only difference would be when he went to the academy. Tbh, I hate it when the academy arc comes, like a whole lot cliche happen there. Anyways, when can I get a loner mc(pls not a half baked one)

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I am the invincible snapdragon of a thousand votes, upvote me in my quest to achieve a thousand upvotes!

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Immortallord
ImmortallordLv12

so far, all in all. to me. this is the best novel that I have ever read on this platform. I am infact lost of what to say. The novel is just that good. and Supreme IQ. well apart from the fact that I am here to write a heartfelt review, I am also here to congratulate you. pretty soon, you will surpass dark magus on on the whole rankings, cause I believe yours is better. and also a challenge from me. hehehe. next year or upper next year. not sure due to secondary school problems. but anyway. by then, I plan to release a novel even better than yours. though I can see it's going to.be pretty hard, basically am trying to ascend the nine Heavens as a mortal. but am sure I can do it. hehehe. Anyways my thought to anyone who sees this review. my advise is to read this novel. or else you will surely regret it. great job Author sama!!👏

1yr
Void_Daoist
Void_DaoistLv12

A perfect 5star for this novel. If there was a 6, I would give it. Guys, this novel as the potential to be among the top three best system novels out there. You guys give it a try honestly.

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