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PrimalVoidDragon
PrimalVoidDragonLv41yr
2023-12-27 01:30

The story feel too rushed ,and the whole four timelines thingy is a bit confusing .the idea of chat group is good but the members being same guy from same world though different timelines make it kinda awkward .The idea of a 6 years old reincarnator from a modern world been able to hide from experienced soul masters without training is also sus .

Douluo Dalu: Four Timelines, One Soul

Nero_schizoid
4.7
19 Chs

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Nero_schizoid
Nero_schizoidAuthor

Well considering the original novel I don't think it is rushed and there is nothing much to add when they are only level 20. Secondly, although they are reincarnated they still have the memories of their predecessor and in a world like Douluo where the concept of reincarnation doesn't exist, people would just assume its maturity

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oldeus
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Sorry, I really liked this story I didn't know what else to say I had a hard week Because of university and lessons So please don't throw away this story, it was a very beautiful and unique story

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Nero_schizoid
Nero_schizoidAuthor

Hey! Nero here I will slowly update this book. As for the photos of Martial souls, I will upload it in the auxiliary status chapter

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darknightofAnime
darknightofAnimeLv14

It a really good fanfic with a really interesting concept anyway good luck author

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oldeus
oldeusLv13

when will you update the story man we are waiting for it you must give more then 10 chapter or the stability of update wont be given any star .

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SHajime
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when will you update the chapter I really love this story

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observerVXKLv4

Very interesting concept but I hope the story is as interesting as the concept. .

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oldeus
oldeusLv13

it's been about a month when are you going to update the story we are waiting for it .

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oldeus
oldeusLv13

very good ...........................................................................................................................................

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oldeus
oldeusLv13

when will you update the story man we are waiting for it do you thinks it fun to not update the story if i find any ways to report you i will surely report you

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