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I thought the ML would be Xiao Yishen but you made third brother as ML. Even if we consider the title, it should be Second brother as ML since he's apt to mountain man. Also from first onwards it had been Second brother who's with FL. I didn't like it at all. I wasted my time reading the story. Who wants Second brother as ML, you people don't waste your time by reading this story. Sorry, Author but I am so disappointed
The Spirited Daughter-in-law and the Mountain Man
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I agree; initially, I identified with the elder brother as Mountain Man. But then I had to remind myself that all three men are from the same household living at the base of a mountain. Therefore, I am not going to be so frustrated by the poor AI translation of the ML. My dissatisfaction with the title is the description of Daughter-in-law, the FL clearly isn't one. I can reluctantly accept the slow burn 'romance', but there are so many plot quagmire. It is very difficult to get past the blindfolded polygamy bottleneck. It is a mental torment to find much affection and chemistry for any couple combination. At one point, an ink stone is sharpened, and it accurately reflects the relationship between the FL and the ML. I do not feel that the book is a great one, nor do I think that I have completely wasted time, coins, and effort during this experience. I have been entertained, but I have spent too much time walking within the character development maze to feel satisfied with the center and celebrate.