Item: Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
Rating: 2
Author: Frida_Barrera

Frida_BarreraLv141yr

2023-10-03 13:17

The plot is well known: FL is tricked by evil stepsister and stepmom, FL gets pregnant and disappears from the face of the earth for him until. Many years later. The story itself is interesting, however it is so badly translated whereas even the name of the characters get switched. I know there’s a better translation. I just haven’t found it. Hope they give this a good editor or just go back with the original names and don’t mess up a good story.

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

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