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Helen_Davidson
Helen_DavidsonLv141yr
2023-09-26 20:13

I really like the plot of the story I like the characters in the story, it's funny how all the sudden they find each other after 5 years ....

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

As If Dawn
3.5
1353 Chs

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BIW283
BIW283Lv4

Heavens!!! Why English names?!This book is on Zhao family of 8X8=64 group belonging to the same world universe of book series by the authour "Like Dawn" or "As if Dawn" or as previously known "Dawnesque".Western characters are Western and eastern are Eastern. Changing the names don't make them Western. Particularly NOT Dawnesque's stories' and character settings!🤦🏽‍♀️

1yr

Nova_Dragon16
Nova_Dragon16Lv4

I'm bad at writing these things, but I do want to say im 16 chapters in and this story is simply amazing I love it and I recommend this story highly.

1yr
Dhiane
DhianeLv14

I like very much though I'm a little confused why the author change the name of the characters... I'm waiting for chapter releases on the old one I didn't know it was changed

1yr
Litt13aznd011
Litt13aznd011Lv15

shaking my head why the name change .. should keep everything orginal 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️ name is in English accept the male lead but money is still yuan in the novel 🙄🙄

1yr
_opalescent99
_opalescent99Lv3

Names of places and even background objects are misrepresented or shoddily fabricated. Character speech and description is choppy and it takes you out of the story. Translation work is poorly done. A few more editing passes would have made this readable but as is, it is a headache waiting to happen.

11mth
TTH
TTHLv5

They should change the names back. As much as I want to read the story, I won’t be reading this translation. This is part of a 7 part series with recurring characters and it will be hard to keep up with these totally unrelated names.

1yr
Frida_Barrera
Frida_BarreraLv14

The plot is well known: FL is tricked by evil stepsister and stepmom, FL gets pregnant and disappears from the face of the earth for him until. Many years later. The story itself is interesting, however it is so badly translated whereas even the name of the characters get switched. I know there’s a better translation. I just haven’t found it. Hope they give this a good editor or just go back with the original names and don’t mess up a good story.

1yr
Maizatul_Zakaria_6812
Maizatul_Zakaria_6812Lv12

Highly recommended. The storyline is so captivating

1yr
Mohd_Afzal_8933
Mohd_Afzal_8933Lv4

there are so many mistakes in translation . I am regretting why i read this.

16d
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