this idea of story is honestly really interesting. The story development is fantastic. the writing quality is a bit of, but I guess that can be fixed. Congratulations on a good story.
KK_Khine
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LIKEcan you please check out mine because I need a second opinion.my story is "Darkness rising: a League of legends fantasy*
KK_Khine:hello there, thanks for checking out the story! Glad to hear you find the idea interesting and like where the plot is going. 😄I'll definitely work on improving the writing quality. really appreciate your feedback 😊