First off, the book is really easy to read, I've only read a few chapters, but so far, there aren't any grammatical errors, which just shows how much work the author is putting in. My only little suggestion is if there were more details about the main character and everything surrounding her. Other than that, good job author.
The_Mrsix
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LIKEThank you for your kind feedback and encouraging words, dear reader. I'm an amateur writer, and though I'm quite busy, I'm dedicated to delivering chapters that are easy to read. Currently, I'm in the final stages of the "Kuruyami Accident Arc." I highly recommend giving it a read. Additionally, I'm in the early stages of developing a new arc. Stay tuned for more updates![The_Mrsix]