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The idea is kind of good, but the exclusion is very average, things happen too quickly with almost no time for a proper introduction of the main characters, I don't like showing a plot happening in the background and taking so long to put into practice, besides the What irritates me the most recently is that the protagonist spends the entire chapter bragging about bathing the strongest, only for a few chapters later to appear seriously injured out of nowhere with no explanation and the author introduces a flashback to tell what happened, instead of showing things naturally (Google Translate)
Reincarnated as Toji in Chainsaw Man(Spanish Ver)
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I respect your opinion but surely you wouldn't like it to be 30 chapters focused on 3 characters and their stories, also the fact that Toji was injured is not because it has no explanation. Honestly, I had already written that He was going to face Tops Assassins. What I do agree is that I am pushing the Fanfic a bit but I don't have much time since I am studying and making a Fanfic and studying is very difficult, I also don't have much experience writing and I have barely written much