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DaoistvxYK7D
DaoistvxYK7DLv101yr
2023-12-19 06:18

This is an excellent story. I just can't get enough!definitely worthy of my daily power stones!!!

The Rise of the Superstar Fighter

Baihu
4.4
639 Chs

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WidestGrin
WidestGrinLv6

Why are the girls and women in this story so weird? Either they are perverts or sexual assaulters... Not one woman was mentioned without sexual thoughts including the MC's mother! The author doesn't know how to write women. The pacing of the story is very summary like. It's the type of things I would expect from an article review of the story rather than the actual story...The world building is almost nonexistent... All I know about the place is that it's the modern world with hidden martial artists. I had good expectations at the beginning but it just went downhill after the students started sexually assaulting the mc in public because of his sweat. The parents of the MC are also there just for name's sake. They contribute almost nothing to the story except their existence. Sorry to say this Author but this is my honest opinion.

1yr

Prakash_Acharya_0
Prakash_Acharya_0Lv11

The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character. Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter. The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.

11mth
Phuto05
Phuto05Lv12

I'm a fan of this novel already! The reason why I wrote a review is because I want to support the writer. His work is really great, it's been a while since I found a great novel like this. In the story, the male lead is a nice guy as well as their parents. It's a shame that their life is so tough, hope they'll get a better life.

1yr
Chiara_Marie
Chiara_MarieLv4

I like the character that he is not picking girls up like Pokémon (am at the beginning of the story, like chapter 45) and how he is not like this evil MC a good person and helps his parents🙃🙃🥰

8mth
DaoistvxYK7D
DaoistvxYK7DLv10

PLEASE KEEP UPDATING THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!

23d
I_am_UNKNOWN01
I_am_UNKNOWN01Lv4

very good novel need more chapters of the novel

11mth
I_am_UNKNOWN01
I_am_UNKNOWN01Lv4

really nice novel need more chapters of the legendary novel

11mth
Matthew_Ki
Matthew_KiLv5

Interesting read with a clear premise based on an alternate world. The MC is over powered but limited by both circumstances and environment. Though the characters are not overly well developed, they still draw attention and not completely clichéd. The storyline and plot is entertaining and writing is well paced. If you like a well balanced novel, this one is a good read.

11mth
Nathan547
Nathan547Lv12

Awesome Characters. I can't wait for more 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

1yr
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