Story is decent, but the english isnt great. First 2/3rds of the book need to be fixed up as they have a lot of grammer mistakes along with poor dialogue and descriptions. Its not the worst thing ive seen on here, but it definitely needs to be fixed. Storywise its pretty good, the plot is good and I like that the main character is basically on the spectrum. Social awkwardness is a great and compelling flaw for an op mc to have, and I love how he does it in a way thats realistic, as in the mc is snart, and can understand a lot, but he doesnt always understand some social ques as well as not totally understanding how to interact with people, but still trying. Honestly the plot, mc, and all of that is fantastic, its just the english needs some work
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