well written and no huge redflags (like other people in the story knowing that he is not from this universe like the ancient one). the mc himself hasn't seemed to create goals outside of getting more powerful, which is fine albeit a little boring. I like the character interactions, conversations are written in a way that is interesting. so long as the stability of updates remains consistent than it should shape up to be a good novel.
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