FIVE FOOOKIN STARS MATE!!! Story and word flow: Excellent! Development: Perfect! MC: Do I need to say anything to that? Your story is captivating and immediately pulled me in. I saw some mistakes but they are easily sweeped by the strong flow of the story! Keep posting Author, and I'll keep reading. Added to my Collection! Hmmm, what else can I say? Maybe just that this story is going to be BIG! Peace :)
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LIKEPatrik_Crown:And of course, sorry for letting you wait for too much Author, but I got some stuff to take care of. Anyway, I wish you and your story only the best!