Review Detail of KK_Khine in Solo Dominance

Hey there! I've been reading your story from chapter 1 to 10, and I've got some thoughts to share. First off, I really like the concept of blood energy and the tattoos. It adds a unique and intriguing element to the story. However, I'd suggest explaining some of the concepts a bit more clearly, especially for readers who might not be familiar with your world's rules😄The pacing is generally good, but be mindful not to overwhelm readers with too much information too quickly. Balance is key, right?😊Your protagonist's background is fascinating, and I'm curious to learn more about their motivations and emotions as the story progresses. Dive deeper into their character development, and it'll make them even more relatable.When it comes to dialogue, try to make it feel even more natural. Sometimes it can sound a bit forced, but that's a minor thing that can easily be polished.Adding more sensory details to the world and characters can really enhance the reading experience.Just my suggestions 😁Lastly, your story has a lot of potential. Keep refining your writing skills, and I'm excited to see where you take these characters and this unique world. Keep up the great work! 📚🖋️