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FransizSef
FransizSefLv41yr
2023-09-05 01:15

So far this is good but i can't give definitive review just from 12 chapters. I just wanted to say isn't gilgamesh too strong for mushoku tensei world? I bet he even solos the verse by himself just by using ea. Considiring he really has all of his tresures by his side there is basically no one that can face gilgamesh. I did see that most of the enemies will be obsolete but from what i know there everybody is obsole againts him. I'm just afraid that its gonna be boring but we will see

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SrCuervo
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I will use many other factors in my favor for the story, from what I understand there are only two beings that could give him a face, one is Orsted who is a demigod currently considered a god, and the other is the god Human. Both can destroy the world in one hit, so it will be interesting to watch. In addition to that, I will carefully work the progress so that it does not become boring, I hope that my methods are attractive to the reader at all times.

shifts
shiftsLv5

you will need to weaken gil, so that the fanfic becomes good. since he is tier 1, no mushoku character can even resist a single hit from him.

SEIKO
SEIKOLv13

that's a bit of a stretch, i think gilgamesh would still slap them. though, i'm not exactly well-versed in the mushoku lore...

SrCuervo:I will use many other factors in my favor for the story, from what I understand there are only two beings that could give him a face, one is Orsted who is a demigod currently considered a god, and the other is the god Human. Both can destroy the world in one hit, so it will be interesting to watch. In addition to that, I will carefully work the progress so that it does not become boring, I hope that my methods are attractive to the reader at all times.
ByEmmet
ByEmmetLv12

No point in weakening him really. He is arrogant enough😂 like when he lost to shirou

shifts:you will need to weaken gil, so that the fanfic becomes good. since he is tier 1, no mushoku character can even resist a single hit from him.
DarkKnife69TT
DarkKnife69TTLv1

Bueno sí pero ahí era un servant, su poder era infinitamente inferior a su poder real que es el que debería tener en la novela.

ByEmmet:No point in weakening him really. He is arrogant enough😂 like when he lost to shirou
Cerberus_36
Cerberus_36Lv14

shifts:you will need to weaken gil, so that the fanfic becomes good. since he is tier 1, no mushoku character can even resist a single hit from him.
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