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Honestly, the story had a lot of potential, but I feel like it's pretty random, like the author doesn't know what he's doing right. The characters don't have any depth either, overall it's not one of the worst stories I've read, but it comes close. So read for your own brain at risk.

Very great novel, I like where the plot is heading, it's very intriguing keep up the good work......!![img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Second time trying to read this, and I couldn't keep reading. There's something wrong with the paragraph structure that makes the story feel disconnected, additionally, there are way too many characters introduced all at once, with no background whatsoever, right at the beginning. It feels as if it is lacking at least an introduction/childhood arc so that we understand the other characters and get interested in learning about them. Beyond the grammatical issues, I simply couldn't bring myself to care about any of the characters (MC included). If you have an outline, I'd suggest finishing the story according to the outline, and then rewriting it with all of the knowledge you learned while writing.

Pretty good read

This isn't my choice of genre, but the story has a unique attribute that draws everyone in. Furthermore, I must applaud the Author's writing skills - it is hard to find books with reasonable grammar these days.

Reading is fun 'coz writing is good and neat^^ Keep the updates coming, dear author🙌🙌

Nice world setting and interesting story. Just invest more in developing the MC like his motivation and background story before being reincarnated. It might help to get the readers to sympathize with the MC...

thank you for your efforts writing to start, now for the nitty gritty i find my self not caring for any of the oc's besides the mc they are not memorable nore does the interactions at his school or club activities add anything meaningful. yay get a gyru kiss her fall for her in like hours..... look at my secret club room with beer and smokes ...for edge lord cool points... i just dont see much point to it. i end up skimming the chapters like i would skip filler episodes of naruto.