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Review Detail of ICopiedandPasted0 in Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

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Very interesting concept and the writing quality is great, just one big problem. Too much info all at once or not even explaining info. A lot of the time it seems like something is mentioned that has an obvious implication to it and although I too am a fan of foreshadowing it doesn't feel like foreshadowing if it is even an attempt at that. Like there's a line "Each of the heroes have their own unique story, that's what made the novel so popular." Great! Each of the heroes of the original novel the MC read had a bunch of different protagonists with their own story, but I had no idea before this, and this feels like pretty important information that should have more than one just casual passing. I also feel like there's always a bunch of info dumping, it feels like there's so much idea and creativity flowing through this story but it all just bursts out in big bubbles one at a time. It makes the information your giving me hard to understand and it makes me unmotivated to read or pay attention to it. That said the story is interesting and cool, and I think if the info was more spread or well introduced (like we're suddenly thrown into a few chapters of an entirely different scene with no mention of MC and I though the author posted chapters to the wrong story) it would be much better. 7/10- Definitely worth a shot, and don't let this review dishearten anybody from reading this as it is definitely interesting just flawed in some areas.

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Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

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