Review Detail of JRCaste in Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me
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would've rated higher, but quality of the story quickly dropped down mid vol 1 and 2. what happened Author. you were doing really good at the beginning.Writing quality 3/5 at first it was 4 almost 5 but it wasnt, sometimes the preference of his writing style is cringe.story development is 3/5 because I got confused both with the story and the MC himself. is he autistic?character design and update stability are both 5, because it was atleast creative and stable in updatesworld background is 4/5 its okay atleast, still dont'tunderstand some things but great potential, dont waste it.I rated it while keeping in mind this work is Authors first.
Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me
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Yeah Thanks, your words are genuine and upto the mark, If my guess is correct then the issue must be with those chapters about future and all, Apologies, At that time, I don't know what had gotten into me, But, I love your review and thank you for understanding me ~ It was my first book so have many errors but will try to improve myself, Please give a try to my other book too.
Great then, you need to do a lil bit of tweaking of the MC tho, decide what's his personality/character and all cause being cringe and chad at the same time wont work. I meant it when I asked if he's autistic or somein, no offense xD and for reading you other work. I'll do exactly that rn
A4KL:Yeah Thanks, your words are genuine and upto the mark, If my guess is correct then the issue must be with those chapters about future and all, Apologies, At that time, I don't know what had gotten into me, But, I love your review and thank you for understanding me ~ It was my first book so have many errors but will try to improve myself, Please give a try to my other book too.image
JRCaste:Great then, you need to do a lil bit of tweaking of the MC tho, decide what's his personality/character and all cause being cringe and chad at the same time wont work. I meant it when I asked if he's autistic or somein, no offense xD and for reading you other work. I'll do exactly that rnimage